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A Day in Equestria for Twily page 1

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It’s amazing too me that even with all these commissions :faint: I still have to do. That I am able to continue working on my other pony ideas and my own art.
Mostly pony stuff I need to take a break from my world for a bit and consternate on just brony things to keep me mind sane. :nuu:

The idea of this comic is inspired by the title of the Beatles song a day in the life (BTW great song ) =D

And the concept of seeing our beloved Ponyville on a normal boring day :P. No saving the world from chaos lords, no rescuing your friends from big mean dirty diamond dogs no royal duties and no breaking the forth wall referencing pop culture. Just a mundane simple day in the life of princess twily told in a series of sequential panels.

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As a comic book artist and fan I appreciate creators who can give me an engaging slice of life story through the use of just visuals so this was an experiment in my comic style :meow: as well because I suck at writing any good stories .I see this being helpful for my Humanise.com graphic novel. :excited: jowybean.deviantart.com/galler…

No surprise that after finishing this comic off I want to do more based on the other mane 6 :facepalm: and background characters this was a lot of fun to draw using just my faithful pens.:)

Check out my FIM title card project jowybean.deviantart.com/galler…

Until next deviation LATERS :peace:

Like it:blowkiss:hate it :police: its up to you not marmite :dummy:
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Canon
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Canon MP490 series
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
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Cause I'm a little lazy I'm gonna critique the entire four page piece

with what little we have seen in the series so far its nice to have someone's perspective of what twilight's life would be like with her wings back in ponyville. While it may seem like its almost unrealistic for someone to do all these things in one day but with twilight's organizing skills that not such a far cry for the comic and the artist as defiantly taken note of that as her to do list make many appearances throughout the comic from time to time. as for what the artist decided to show what twilight did for the day, well most is what anyone would expect of twi to be frank though i am glad to see that the flying train was a nice addition as it is what the fanbase hope to see in later episode of the actural show though a tad surprised that fluttershy was helping with the train.

the interaction between the character is natural and charming with the expressions done very well and tell the story and mood without the need for which i find very impressive.

the layout im afraid while pretty flowing at times it can be a bit crowed at a quick read through especially without colour which in all honesty could make each scene stand out more if it was coloured. otherwise the backgrounds and the designs are vast with just the right amount of detail. defiantly one of the best short comics i have seen so far and hope to see more of.