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Until next deviation LATERS Bronies Peace 

sketched and coloured in Photoshop CS6 with my Wacom in 2 hours

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Critique by ktheman1911 ktheman1911/critique/1276083401">Aug 2, 2015, 1:09:32 PM
For starters, The rich lively color pallet used is wonderful, with everything popping it causes the viewer to look at every inch of the piece, Visually stunning and telling a story are key to making great artwork... which is what I see when I look at this! The choice to go with strong outlines is unique and works well in the sketch, I have always been a fan of your art style and the improvements done throughout each sketch as you progress still amaze me! As a critique must go I do have to have some constructive criticism or else its just incessant fanning! So, to critique, AJ's horse anatomy could be worked on so that her rump wasn't so far up in the air, more a working farmhouse body.. i.e. thicker. Other then that almost completely unnoticeable part, the rest of the piece is wonderful. Thank you for taking the time to read my input. Have a wonderful day!!
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cajobif Featured By Owner Edited Dec 10, 2015
Applejack: Here's you change Twilight. Say... It appears I have one apple pie left in my stock. Freshly cooked this morning. Want it?
Twilight: Sure. How much?
AJ: Shuck, Twilight! You are my friend. I can't make you-
T: I paid for the apples and the candies apples you strongly recommended me to try, so... How much?
AJ: *nervous laugh* Yeah... Five Bits.
T: Uh, can you make a "friend" discount for me?
AJ: For you Twilight.. what about three?
T: Wow! Really?
AJ: Yep. Just for you. Here.
Applejack hoofed over the pie to her purple friend who took it with her magic.
T: Thanks!
AJ: But, please... don't tell everypony I do that. If they would ask all for a "friend" discounts, it would ruin me!
T: Don't worry. I won't tell.
AJ: Thanks Twilight.
T: However this is not somewhat I would see you refuse to anyone.
AJ: That's the point! I like to see them all with a smile on their face after tasting my apple produces that I can't refuse giving them one!
T: *giggles* You're a great friend and pony Applejack.
AJ: Aww, shucks! I just care for everypony that's all.
T: See you later.
Twilight teleported.
Mare: Hey! I just heard that Princess Twilight bought a apple pie from you.
AJ: Yep! Freshly baked from this mornin'. But I'm afraid I sold her my last one.
M: Really? Aww...
AJ: B-but if you come back later, I would have made a new and fresh batch.
M:*gasp* You will?
AJ: Yep.
M: For me?
AJ: Well, yeah?
M: How much?
AJ: For you, what about five?
M: Um. C-can you give me a friend discount? Just this time?
AJ: Well.... what about four bits each?
M: Excellent! I'll take three!
AJ: Really? Wow! Then, about ten for the three?
M: Oh my Celestia! Thank you so much!
AJ: You're welcome. They'll be ready by lunch.
M: That's great! Oh! In the meanwhile, I'll take six apples and...
At the corner of the street, a alicorn gaze upon her farmer friend, a smile across her face.
T: Great pony indeed.

Couldn't edit the previous one, so put another version here. Is this one better?
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Stuntpony Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015
Can't find any breaks from character here. Yep, sounds right. =)
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cajobif Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015
Excellent. It will help me for future writings.
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cajobif Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015
Applejack: Here's you change Twilight. Say... It appears I have one apple pie left in my stock. Freshly cooked this morning. Want it?
Twilight: Sure. How much?
AJ: Shuck, Twilight! You are my friend. I can't make you-
T: I paid for the apples and the candies apples you strongly recommended me to try, so... How much?
AJ: *nervous laugh* Yeah... Five Bits.
T: Uh, can you make a "friend" discount for me?
AJ: For you Twilight.. what about three?
T: Wow! Really?
AJ: Yep. Just for you. Here.
Applejack hoofed over the pie to her purple friend who took it with her magic.
T: Thanks!
AJ: But, please... don't tell everypony I do that. If they would ask all for a "friend" discounts, it would ruin me!
T: Don't worry. I won't tell.
AJ: Thanks Twilight.
T: However this is not somewhat I would see you refuse to anyone.
AJ: That's the point! I like to see them all with a smile on their face after tasting my apple produces that I can't refuse giving them one!
T: *giggles* You're a great friend and pony Applejack.
AJ: Aww, shucks! I just care for everypony that's all.
T: See you later.
Twilight teleported.
Mare: Hey! I just heard that Princess Twilight bought a apple pie from you.
AJ: Yep! Freshly baked from this mornin'. But I'm afraid I sold her my last one.
M: Really? Aww...
AJ: B-but if you come back later, I would have made a new and fresh batch.
M:*gasp* You will?
AJ: Yep.
M: For me?
AJ: Well, yeah?
M: How much?
AJ: For you, what about five?
M: Um. C-can you give me a friend discount? Just this time?
AJ: Well.... what about four bits each?
M: Excellent! I'll take three!
AJ: Really? Wow! Then, about ten for the three?
M: Oh my Celestia! Thank you so much!
AJ: You're welcome. They'll be ready by lunch.
M: That's great! Oh! In the meanwhile, I'll take six apples and...
In the corner of the street, a alicorn gaze upon her farmer friend, a smile across her face.
AJ: Great pony indeed.

Couldn't edit the previous one, so put another version here. Is this one better?
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songhuanjie Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015  Student
they're undoubtedly cute:D (Big Grin) 
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cajobif Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
Applejack: Here's you change Twilight. Say... It appears I have one apple pie left in my stock. Freshly cooked this morning. Want it?
Twilight: Sure. How much?
AJ: Shuck, Twilight! You are my friend. I can't make you-
T: I paid for the apples and the candies apples you strongly recommended me to try, so... How much?
AJ: *nervous laugh* Yeah... Five Bits.
T: Uh, can you make a "friend" discount for me?
AJ: Nope
T: What? Even after I bought all this?
AJ: Ponies hears you and knowing that I can make "friend" discounts would ruin me!
T: Makes sense.... and is somewhat creepy. Here you go.
AJ: Thanks Twilight. Hey! What about some...
Twilight teleported.
AJ: ...apple spread for- Huh? Did she just... Hmph! That's not polite and-
Mare: Hey! I just heard that Princess Twilight bought a apple pie from you.
AJ: Yep! Freshly baked from this mornin'.
M: Really? How much?
AJ: Eight Bits.

Wonderful work
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Stuntpony Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2015
-No friends discount.
-Five bits
-Princes bought a pie, how much?
-Eight bits.


Applejack, You... You. You freaking friend. X)))
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cajobif Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2015
Oh. She's not lying. She's not lowering her price for Twilight, she's raising the price for others (Princess Twilight fans). That's business. When the demands is there and your farms needs money.
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Stuntpony Featured By Owner Edited Dec 5, 2015
Oh? How about the "Best night ever"(?) episode, was it? She gave something for free to Rarity, because a certain pompous oaf didn't want to pay.
Also:
"It appears I have one apple pie left in my stock."

Mare: Hey! I just heard that Princess Twilight bought a apple pie from you.
AJ: Yep! Freshly baked from this mornin'.
M: Really? How much?
AJ: Eight Bits.

OK, Element of honesty. OK.
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cajobif Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015
When you put it this way, Applejack made a favor for Rarity because of the situation. And some sellers can be generous. For example, this morning my usual baker wanted to give me a free bread because they were out of my usual 6 grains oats bread.

And I see I should have reread the story before submitting it. And ended this way:

AJ: Yep! Freshly baked from this mornin'. But I'm currently out of stock. Sorry.
M: Really? Aww... How much anyway?
AJ: Eight Bits.

And AJ jumped on the occasion there is interest for the product for making some more profit. A bit like like when Twilight helped Rarity for the Princess Dress, but indirectly without Twi being noticed. Until she does.
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Stuntpony Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015
Yeah, no. Rarity had the money, since she went for her pocket(?). They are close friends and they would be willing to make heavy discounts and occasionally do things for free. Rarity(yeah, element of generosity, but still) went and done free dresses for the main six. She went on to do Twilight's maindo in the first episode. Applejack gave things for free to Rarity(Rarity was going to pay, she had the bits). So yeah, Jacky would be willing to make a "friend discount". =)
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cajobif Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015
Makes sense.
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templar127 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
MOAR APPLES!!!
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Helsaabi Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
I really love it!
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:iconjyroman53:
jyroman53 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I say TWO REFINED FOR DEM APPLES !
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NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Professional Artist
BUY SOME APPLES, JOWYBEAN!
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NoradTwo Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015
That is a kick butt style you have going on here!
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TheDragonfly52413 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Always love your work :)
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Cooper31 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute, Good Quality, Awesome...Nice work!:) (Smile) 
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tigreanpony Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015
Wo this is very good they look so clear nicely done and the shading is quite good as well.
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IBAIPshow Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Professional Artist
Mmmm...magic apples? /)
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SwordSparks Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't mind if I do.
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ROCuevas Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015
Cute. :D
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TooCliched Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Student Writer
I'll buy some apples of course!
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sokesamurai Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015
The idea of the apple clan having a small shoppe like this is just so pleasing to me.
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