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LA Part 7 (ended I am afraid)

Published: Jan 27, 2015

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Luna Academy.

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My FIM comic project that was a Collaboration with my friend and editor

has officially stopped. The decision for this apart from being no updates for months :stuipdme: (and I am going to be honest here). Is because
my initial intention with the project was to create a big pony comic adventure that could rival other popular ones on DA. The amount of views a MLP comic gets is crazy and I wanted to be a part of that scene. its stupid,but true.

So much has happened with my creative life that I cannot make any time for it. The detailed art alone would take over 8 hours. I have to focus my energy on things that are more worth my time and fuel my passion for creating art and not with the idea of producing art because of popularity.

however despite it ending I am leaving the pages I did on DA as a showcase of what my comic book style for ponies would look like.

from now on if I get any ideas that I think are worth telling in comic form I will stick with just one off jokes or small comics.and Still refer to

for their writing and editing.

thank you for all who read and supported the comic and commented on the pages. and I hope you can understand and respect my decision on this matter.

A BIG BIG thanks to my friend for being my editor and co writer of the series

credit goes to the one and only for the cutie marks used.

Check out my FIM title card project jowybean.deviantart.com/galler… i will have a new card done soon

Until next deviation LATERS Bronies

drawn and painted in Photoshop CS6 with my Wacom Pro in 15 hours

Like ithate it its up to you not marmite

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1585x4682px 3.65 MB

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xxxMakixxx

Aug 26, 2015

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

- Visión: Reflects ok what actually is: a fancomic of mlp, with a drop or your own.
- Originality: is hard to be make a 100% original comic of mlp. With 7 pages far still no original own character (may be in the future will apear). The backgrounds are more or less original (forest, the academy...).
- Technique: color and backgrounds are great (forest. Poniville and academy), expresions are funny and well drawn, the movement is clearly defined (ex. page 5).
- Impact: with only 7 pages is still a bit early to know if it will be a great comic but it could be one of the best mlp fan-made comics.

To improve: Create an original main character, sometimes proportions pony / bulding are not accurate (not to important actually).

To keep: backgrounds / color, flutershy and pinkie expressions and movements (for example, page 3 where pinkie is packing her stuff), the story so far, way of drawing.