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Luna Academy cover by Jowybean Luna Academy cover by Jowybean

Luna Academy Plot 

One day at Sugar cube corner Pinkie Pie receives a strange letter from the mail pony that she believes is for a free holiday for two. She begs Fluttershy to join her and she reluctantly says yes. But little do the girls know that they have accidentally signed applications to enrol at Luna Academy a School for the children and guards of the night. to make matters worse the ponies that the applications belong too are going to track down the thieves who stole them. How will Pinkie and Fluttershy cope with the hard training long nights and unusual characters inside the moon goddesses academy?, your have to find out. :)

Yep thats right i have decided to attempt a story driven comic based entirely on the concept sketch i made this week for Luna if she had an Academy… . this idea become so interesting that i already started writing out a script (i know scary thought considering my appealing spelling sometimes. :fear:) and pre planed the beginning on how they enter the academy i see this series if it takes off as humous adventurous and very Pinkie Pie if you catch my drift.

for the worlds architecture i will be borrowing a lot of things off Honnouji Academy from Kill La Kill :headbang: :love: including some of the uniform designs for the students and the lady of the night herself lol. I plan this to be an all age show comic so no fan service or talking uniforms that drink your blood for power sorry :doh:.

now i am going to brutally honest and say this whole venture may fail as soon as i begin :roll: but i want to give this a shot not just to draw more pony comic art but also test my skills in writing :eager: this may be a personal fan project but any type of script will benefit my original work later on. 

i also know luna is a big character to you guys so feel free to chime in with ideas or critiques about this story idea that way i can make it a lot better.

Well heres hoping to a new fun pony project if not eh it was a good idea while it lasted ;^^ .and i thank you for looking at it. 

no idea when part one will be done but i have made free time for this next week. :)

Check out my FIM title card project… i will have a new card done soon 

Until next deviation LATERS Bronies :peace:

painted in Photoshop CS6 with my Wacom Pro 

 Is this Cute :meow: Win :winner: Fail :crying: 

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superpika293 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds interesting!
NegativeFade Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Coool ^_^
lsh94109 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
Hello, I'm Korean brony.
I found this cartoon, and it was so awesome!
I want to show my friends, too.
So, if you don't mind asking, may I translate these series into Korean?
I'll reveal the source after finishing translation.
hecc95 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool, made me think in an videogame cover.
ClassicBlaze Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
Amazing cover!
yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
Seems interesting. Maybe Flutterbat will make an appearance :)
Milkitalix Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Hi jowybean i made a group dedicating luna academy and you hope you not mad :c
:iconlunadatflankplz:Theres a group in clash of clan that i found called "Luna Academy /)"sapphirevision421.deviantart.c…  i joined in c: :iconlunafsjalplz:but there new tho so luna needs more students :iconforeveralunaplz:
We We'll Be Happy if thou shalt join my Academy :iconprincesslunashyplz:
I understand if you dont want to :iconscaredlunaplz:
Envirotech Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:D I'm glad I"m already following you cause this looks like EPIC WIN full of pinkie pie cuteness.. :D Loved the two first reads, even if I do them out of order it looks very cool and can't wait to see the story progress ^_^ Wish you much luck and happy thoughts!! 
sapphire475gs Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
I see you have been inspired.  Glad to hear that KLK was impressionable.

:iconpinkiepieplz: :iconsaysplz: "I gotta find out who killed my jo~ke!  I hear the punchline within my mi~nd..."
Sire-Sword Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes. I will read this forever.
kingofraggedy Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
I'm hoping this takes off swimmingly. You've got my vote on this story. Will keep a heads-up on updates. :)
Yami-Marik93 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
must read the story
Scyphi Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well if it DOES take off, I'll definitely be there to view it, I love the idea. :D
ArcCahlon Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really hope to see more of this soon. the amount of cute and startled faces by shy shall be worth it 
MissIp Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
I am extremely excited and the story in mind is just too perfect
Dragaun Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
ohh lord poor Fluttershy

"considering my appealing spelling sometimes" I see what you did there. 
I hope....maybe
   Please tell me
   appealing or appalling?
Sir-Pumpkinhead Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope you continue this comic idea :D
KingArthur5 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
You'll never know if you could do it if you don't try! Looks awesomazing and I'm looking forward to it!
Keen-Blade Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
Definitely looking forward to this!
Crimson-Shield Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Finally! Another comic to look forward to! :D Can't wait to see where this one goes! 
Mokey1980s Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
Sweet, good luck on it =)
Rockethead117 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
If this is anything like Luna's Academy in Fallout: Equestria, we might have a bit of a problem...
Nevertheless, I'm eager to say I highly anticipate to see what becomes of this!

and how in the hell do you do that 3D looking effect in Luna,a mane? It's simply GORGEOUS.
The-Bloody-Bishop Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
Just wondering, will you need any editors for the position? If this is your first time scripting for a comic, it may be wise to find several colleagues who could give creative feedback to improve the overall organization of your comic.
Jowybean Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Professional General Artist
i will consider this and ask around i am not giving myself deadlines for each page just going to go with the flow. 
The-Bloody-Bishop Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student Writer
That may work. You aren't receiving compensation for this project, so it is up to you to make up your own schedule. That said, if you decide to get an editor, they will want a consistent schedule, even if you only upload a page once a month. Professional editors are very particular on punctuality.

In that case, you may want an informal editor, someone whose on DA who won't demand too much. When it comes to editors, a good medium is required: not too pushy that they demand unrealistic amounts of work, but not too weak that they don't motivate you to work. A gentle, firm and fair hand is needed, and should benefit both the editor, and the artist's working relationship. 

Just be sure not to pick any friends, or any hard-asses to be your editor. Friends will pull too many punches, and hard-asses not enough.
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