Sonic vs Fiona page 3

to see the start of this story click here [link] (although there is no text what so ever so you need to read the images to see what's going

heres the new comic page to my idea for an Archie STH story Sonic vs Fiona when i first did this idea which was last year in September my style approach was more cartoony and cheesy a bit child like really even the colouring looked bad

but here i am in 2009 and see the difference in the style i mean it still has elements of my first attendant at creating this story but i feel its become more Tracy Yardley styled but still with my own touch i like the layout i did for this and the colours there really the same colour schemes but altered with photoshop which is my new main colouring program makes your work so much more lively and more like a pro although i do not consider my self a pro yet.

overall i like this idea more but i am terrible at writing sonic stories although i have read a far bit of Archie's STH comic to know the story line so far but i think if i were to work for them i would just draw the story nothing else comment if you please it did not take that long to do but i am impressed with this its a shame it had to be sonic again but his so cool Way past cool actually (sigh watching SatAM again)

note: i made some errors in the line art and missing characters body parts so please forgive me for that