LA Part 5

This comic is beautifully made as always! The time and effort put into this is almost hard to believe, especially since it's a comic series. Even official comics aren't usually as beautiful as this! However, nothing, not even this piece, is perfect.(Although it almost is!)

To be honest, I think the speech bubbles look rather rushed, although this could simply be an effect of how much time was put into the rest of the comic. Next, in the final panel, Fluttershy's hind legs look a little bit odd to me, and appear to be straight, rather than jointed. Finally, the thing that bugs me most is Fluttershy's attitude. She seems rather aggressive, and it's not really like her. However, none of these things bothered me to the point that it distracted me from the comic too much, or caused me to like it any less, so I don't think you should worry too much. I look forward to the next comic!