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Little to ze Left please by Jowybean Little to ze Left please by Jowybean

MAJOR edit: Taking on board the constructive criticism i got on the flatness of spitfire in the composition i completely reworked her to fit in to the scene a bit more and stand out better from the original. it was pretty bad I cannot believe I thought that was good :stupidme: sorry well you learn from your mistakes as they say :roll:

I have not listened to a lot of the older classic brony songs in a while and decided to do so yesterday (since its after midnight when i am submitting this i need to start my pieces early in the day :P).

 

Well i guess you can see which song and animation i took inspiration from for this particular scene ;) :giggle:

 

I would say that these two things contributed to me becoming a brony artist and really enjoying and experiencing what I can and will do.  :eager:

:excited: 

 

Check out my FIM title card project :thumbsup: jowybean.deviantart.com/galler…

 

Until next deviation LATERS Bronies  :peace: 

drawn and coloured roughly in Photoshop CS6 with my Wacom tablet 5

 

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Marceline347 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Something though is (I don't hate this.. I'm just saying..) Spitfire and the other pony to the left look flat. Everypony else in the photo are great, it's just them two. :) Just trying to help! :D
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Simy12ani Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Artist
Realy? SpitFire is ugly! Rainbow Dash is super Fabulos
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Redtriangle Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I don't understand why Spitfire is upset about this, that way, she can attract more fans and they'll love even more.
Plus, she doesn't look so bad. :D
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ElisDoominika Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
maybe she don't like when somepony yells at her like Photo Finish...or not.. idk :D
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sapiking Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
very unique style with the art... ^_^
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BrownieRaider Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Sorry, but for a minute I thought (Forgot her name..).. The Pony being a model was a cardboard cutout
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:iconfeanorkelsick:
FeanorKelsick Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
hhe, i like the concept here, it fits for spitfire and her reaction is perfect
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:iconswordsparks:
SwordSparks Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You got too many ponies on the set.
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:icongaaragirl1212:
gaaragirl1212 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
XD Spifire's face! Classic!
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:iconlars99:
Lars99 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Nice work on this one. Yays for Photo Finish. She's one of my favorite ponies.
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:iconolimpic-zeuss:
Olimpic-Zeuss Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Oh.. Spitfire... I love that mare.
-Z-
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:iconediblewishez:
ediblewishez Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:la:
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:iconpsycojosho:
PsycoJosho Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
There's Spitfire for ya.

I don't keep up with Equestria Daily much. What animation was this inspired by?
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:iconbhsacrazygurl:
bhsacrazygurl Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It could be "Picture Perfect Pony", but I'm not entirely sure.
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GUILLE832 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
LOL! I love her exasperation face xD Itīs the same it make when I have to be taken a picture :D 
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CrazyPastels Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This reminds me a lot of Thomas Hart Benton. I'm a little too afraid to critique it because he is one of my favorite American Artists. Sweating a little... 
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ytsejam58 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey there. I love this idea (and spitfire is one of my favorite ponies) but if I may make a suggestion. I think you should put a little shaddow between spitfire and tge background cuz right it kind of looks like spitfire just blends right into it, you know what I'm mean?
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gizmo01 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yet anothrt victim ^^;
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Thejboy88 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
If Spitfire hates this so much, she should just walk away.
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:iconsami17:
Sami17 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Maybe she lost a bet...
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:iconthe-silver-falcon:
The-Silver-Falcon Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Love the vibrancy and the expressions and poses the ponies have, but your light sources are all over the place and your perspective is different for each section of the image. Try making a reference layer or two, one for perspective lines and another for lighting lines.
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Fallen-H Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wait... is that pinkie with short hair on the lower right??? :baffled: 
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E-Squid Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
I dunno what it is, but some of the ponies (Spitfire and greenie on the left in particular) look rather flat, like they're cardboard cutouts.
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The-Bloody-Bishop Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Student Writer
I think Spitfire's expression could possibly replace Squidward's for the mascot for the "I Really Wish I Wasn't Here Right Now" button.
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RusStarik Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
Da magics!
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:iconninllot:
ninllot Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
me gusta, esta genial
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:iconbronrg:
bronrg Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
It's Picture  Perfect Pony by Mando and Jan, isn't it? I got it right, right? ^^
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:iconytsejam58:
ytsejam58 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love Mando's rap segment ^^
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:iconbronrg:
bronrg Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Yeah, that certainly was nice. ^^
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kaygirl101 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice work. that said, the only thing that seems off, at least to me, is that Spitfire looks a little flat, like 2-D. Maybe it's all the lights on her taking away the shadows, but that's my opinion.
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GrffinSmith Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
is that pinkiemena?
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:iconschneelocke:
schneelocke Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
On the bottom left? No, she's one of Photo Finish's assistants; her name is High Style.
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:iconarthurcrane:
ArthurCrane Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
Pinkie Pie is in a magazine cover. Awesome!
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Yami-Marik93 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
how did that happen.
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FlywheelAndFirefly Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Picture perfect. The concept of the image itself is great, but what's standing out to me are all the background details you've included. Nice work on that. It really gives the room a story all its own.
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HaloPrime Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Every. LITTLE. Detail in this picture. Holy crap, great job!!!!!
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Dragaun Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
I love it, but Spitfire seems idk, flat? Maybe the pose and angle or that backdrop making her stand out (which should be good no?)

Idk better then anything i could ever do so still like it
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howtouseim Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
Good piece, Gonna be a pain figuring this song out  
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ElementOf-Loyalty Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Spitfire is a fashion model.HAH!
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