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Nui by Jowybean Nui by Jowybean
Inktober Terrors and Bad uns 31 days of Bad guys and mean characters some iconic some obscure some silly .

this is also going to my entires in to :icongranitoons: Finktober

Day 19 Nui Harmie from the anime Kill La Kill 

sketched in Photoshop CS6 with my Wacom pro in 4 hours  

Epic FTW:woohoo: or Do Not want :rage: you choose :mwahaha:
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first off, this is a really fun piece, super dynamic and lots of energy in all your marks. I think, however, that your limited palette combined with your use of line makes for a very noisy image. a lot of the sketchiness' charm is being lost by the fact that there's so many areas where you have dark on light that just draw the eye. for example, when you squint, the area that draws the eye first for me was behind nui's right shoulder (the dark negative space between her hair strands), and that takes away from the focal point that should (I think) be her face. lightening up some shadows and muting the tones of the background would help a lot to pop nui off of the page more, because right now she's almost blending in to the noise of the background. other minor things are could also be addressed, like how nui's hands and head are backwards, how her umbrella doesn't really read at first glance, or how ryuuko kind of looks like an afterthought. overall, there aren't any huge glaring mistakes, rather a lot of small things that build up and take away from the awesome drawing you've made. Big fan of the color choices, and like I said, the energy and character really come through on this piece. Keep up the good work!

-Moniterman
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MasterofMuffin Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017
Also, love the tiny little Ryuko jumping from the tower.
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MasterofMuffin Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017
Um, the cutest little psychopath ever? From my favorite Anime of all time? Drawn in Jowy's signature style? Uh, yes please! Have a fave! Have ten faves! Have all the faves!
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SwordSparks Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That diabolic little monster!
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sketchfacex Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017
HOLY SHIT
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